Love and Longing
For all the sweetness of love,
And uncountable kisses;
There shall always be
On the tip of tongue
A salty drop of tear,
A thirst unquenchable.
And uncountable kisses;
There shall always be
On the tip of tongue
A salty drop of tear,
A thirst unquenchable.
I wait for you
Dressed in soft, white sand;
A little of my shore
Is eaten away every day.
Such is the hunger of love.
A glorious moon conspires.
Every night,
You leap in passion
To touch the moon.
I wait for you
Every night
In envy and love.
A little of my shore
Is eaten away every day.
Such is the hunger of love.
A glorious moon conspires.
Every night,
You leap in passion
To touch the moon.
I wait for you
Every night
In envy and love.
You fall in my arms,
And I hold you.
I am your bottom, ain't I?
You dream of the moon,
In my arms.
Tides of pain rise and fall.
You, playful and young,
I, Drowned in your pain.
Longing for you
To turn back.
Hoping...
You wont turn away.
A moment...
Still, in time.
I am your bottom, ain't I?
You dream of the moon,
In my arms.
Tides of pain rise and fall.
I, Drowned in your pain.
Longing for you
To turn back.
Hoping...
You wont turn away.
A moment...
Still, in time.
Framed, in boundless space.
We stand together
In the infinite sea
Of love, longing and passion.
At the edge of the world.
(c) Ankur Srivastava
We stand together
In the infinite sea
Of love, longing and passion.
At the edge of the world.
(c) Ankur Srivastava
11 comments:
A little of my shore
Is washed away every day.
Eaten away
In the rush of passion.
You have some really wonderful lines that are full of emotion and passion like the ones above, Ankur.
Sergio
Oh, thank you Sergio. I am so happy that you liked it.
hey ankur its awsummmm ..!! u have explicitly shown the depth of your passion ... combined with heart renching pain ... beautiful !! :D
Thank you Leena, you were so quick to read and comment. thank you so much..
Nice one! :)
Emotions are very well expressed.
Best wishes. :)
thank you chandrika ji, for drooping by and appreciating my work.. :) thanks a lot for your wishes
A touching poem....
thank you so much vishal..
Metaphor is excellent and lends itself to a lot. You have successfully taken this into the realm of the good. Shorten it without sacrificing the feeling and make it great :)
I ll try to do that surely... i ll try to be more economic..thank you so much for every advice. please never stop reading me... it really helps me...
This was beautiful.
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